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Re: AW: AW: [Issue] Review of draft-ietf-radext-digest-auth-01.txt, o verview section
Yes, that would be helpful.
On Thu, 24 Mar 2005, Beck01, Wolfgang wrote:
> > > Wolfgang wrote:
> > > [mapping of HTTP Authentication parameters into RADIUS attributes]
> > > We are still in an Overview Section here, so I think that being vague
> > > doesn't hurt too much.
> > Bernard wrote:
> > I found myself trying to get more details early on. Much of
> > the material in Section 3 seems to be at the right level so
> > some of it (a few paragraphs) could be moved up.
> Can you agree with exchanging Section 2 (attributes) and
> Section 3 (Detailed Description)? Then, you get the details
> before jumping into the attributes, but the Overview Section
> would not be laden with details.
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