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RE: Media label review (Was: Re: Please review documents on IESG agenda for June 9, 2005)
Thanks, I will record it as a comment
Bert
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.arkko@piuha.net]
> Sent: Friday, June 03, 2005 13:57
> To: Gonzalo Camarillo (JO/LMF)
> Cc: Wijnen, Bert (Bert); Aaa-Doctors (E-mail); 'mankin@psg.com'
> Subject: Media label review (Was: Re: Please review documents on IESG
> agenda for June 9, 2005)
>
>
> Wijnen, Bert (Bert) wrote:
>
> > o draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-media-label-01.txt
> > The SDP (Session Description Protocol) Label Attribute
> (Proposed Standard)
> > - 5 of 8
> > Note: PROTO Shepherd: gonzalo.camarillo@ericsson.com.
> Normatively required
> > for sipping conference package
> > Token: Allison Mankin
> >
> >
> I reviewed this draft. Looked OK, just one nit:
>
> > This can be acomplished by using an external document
> that points to
>
> s/acomplished/accomplished/
>
> --Jari
>