RE: draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-00.txt posted

[Thomas Nadeau <tnadeau@cisco.com>]

At 10:34 AM 10/25/2001 -0700, S.Manikantan wrote:
> Hello Cheenu
>
> Please find below my comments on the draft.
>
> with best regards
> mani
> (S.Manikantan)
>
> Comment 1:
> "1. Introduction
>   ... 
>    Multi-Protocol Label Switching (MPLS) [MPLSArch].
>                                         
> ^^^^^^^^^^
>   ..."
>
> "2. Terminology
>  ...  
>    document [MPLSArch] and various MPLS-related MIBs such
> as
>            
> ^^^^^^^^^^^
>  ..."
>
> Mani>> The reference can be changed to
> RFC3031.

        

Okay.


> Comment 2:
> "2. Terminology
>  ...
>    [TEMIB], MPLS-LDP-MIB [LDPMIB], MPLS-FTN-MIB [FTNMIB],
> and
>                         
> ^^^^^^^^^
>  ..."
>
> Mani>> The reference to LDPMIB needs to be added to section
> 8

        

Okay.

> References.
>
> Comment 3:
> "4.2.  MPLS-LSR-MIB
>    
>    The MPLS-LSR-MIB describes managed objects for modeling
> a
>               
> ^^^^^^^^
>    ..."
>
> Mani>> The reference to LSRMIB needs to be added??

        

Yes.

> Comment 4:
> "4.2.  MPLS-LSR-MIB
>    ...
>    MPLS cross-connect table (mplsXCTable) in the LSR MIB.
> MPLS
>                                                 
> ^^^^^^^
>    ..."
>
> Mani>> Should it be MPLS-LSR-MIB for
> consistency?

        

Sure.

> Comment 5:
> "4.3.  MPLS-LDP-MIB
>    ...
>    Distribution Protocol (LDP).
>                        
> ^^^^^^^
>    ..."
>
> Mani>> Reference to RFC 3036 can be mentioned here, and
> RFC3036
> can be added to section 8. References.
>
> Comment 6:
> " 4.7.  PPVPN-MPLS-VPN-MIB
>    
>    The PPVPN-MPLS-VPN-MIB [VPNMIB] describes managed
> objects
>                        
> ^^^^^^^^^^
>
>    that are used to model and manage RFC2277bis MPLS 
> VPNs.
>                                     
> ^^^^^^^^^^
>    ..."
>
> Mani>> a) Reference to VPNMIB needs to be added in Section 8
> References.
>        b) RFC2277bis - should this be
> RFC2547bis??

        

Typo,
yes.

> Comment 7:
> "5.2.  Provider Provisioned Virtual Private Network MIBs
>   ...
>    MIBs, as this MIB is described above in section
>                                            
> ^^^^^^^^^^
>   ..."
>
> Mani>> section "4.7" - needs
> added.

        

Thanks for
the comments.

        

--Tom

-----Original Message-----
From:   Cheenu Srinivasan [SMTP:cheenu@alphion.com]
Sent:   Thursday, October 25, 2001 6:33 AM
To:     'mpls@UU.NET'; 'ccamp@ops.ietf.org'
Subject:        draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-00.txt posted

I have posted draft-ietf-mpls-mgmt-overview-00.txt and it should
appear on the IETF site shortly. A copy of this I-D is attached.

Cheenu

> -----Original Message-----
> From: George Swallow [mailto:swallow@cisco.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, October 23, 2001 4:37 PM
> Subject: Re: draft-nadeau-mpls-mgmt-overview-00.txt
>
>
> Given that many have supported the idea and none have opposed, the
> above draft is accepted as a work group draft.
>
> ...George

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