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AD review of: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-wdm-01.txt
- To: "Ccamp-wg (E-mail)" <ccamp@ops.ietf.org>
- Subject: AD review of: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-wdm-01.txt
- From: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>
- Date: Thu, 13 Mar 2003 23:12:11 +0100
I am basically OK with this document except for:
- I see no IPR statement which is required for stds track
documents
- I see no IANA considreations section, while the document
does need IANA to make assignments.
- You may want to add the copyright verbage at the end
of the document.
- I suspect that security ADs may find the sec.considerations
section weak. You may at least want to state that you recommend
to use the same security considerations as in the [LMP] document
Maybe the authors can do a quick rev, since I do not intend
to ask for IETF Last Call before the meeting in SF is over.
Thanks,
Bert