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AD review of: draft-ietf-ccamp-lmp-wdm-01.txt



I am basically OK with this document except for:

- I see no IPR statement which is required for stds track
  documents
- I see no IANA considreations section, while the document
  does need IANA to make assignments.
- You may want to add the copyright verbage at the end
  of the document.
- I suspect that security ADs may find the sec.considerations
  section weak. You may at least want to state that you recommend
  to use the same security considerations as in the [LMP] document

Maybe the authors can do a quick rev, since I do not intend
to ask for IETF Last Call before the meeting in SF is over.

Thanks,
Bert