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RE: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt
Bert,
Here is the ping that you requested.
Ron
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org [mailto:owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org]On
> Behalf Of Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> Sent: Monday, April 28, 2003 11:54 PM
> To: Ron Bonica; ccamp@ops.ietf.org; bwijnen@lucent.com
> Subject: RE: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt
>
>
> Thanks... busy with other things now. Will check early next week.
> Pls ping me if I do not answer by say Wed next week.
>
> Thanks,
> Bert
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Ron Bonica [mailto:Ronald.P.Bonica@mci.com]
> > Sent: maandag 28 april 2003 18:58
> > To: ccamp@ops.ietf.org; bwijnen@lucent.com
> > Subject: RE: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt
> >
> >
> > Bert,
> >
> > I have spun a new version of draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq. It is
> > available at
> > http://www.bonica.org/docs/draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-02.txt.
> > Please take a
> > look.
> >
> > If you think that this version addresses the IESG concerns, I
> > will post send
> > it to the draft editor.
> >
> > Ron
> >
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org [mailto:owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org]On
> > > Behalf Of Ron Bonica
> > > Sent: Monday, April 21, 2003 5:51 PM
> > > To: ccamp@ops.ietf.org; bwijnen@lucent.com
> > > Subject: RE: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt
> > >
> > >
> > > Bert,
> > >
> > > Sorry to have taken so long to respond. I have been away on
> > vacation.
> > >
> > > Comments inline.....
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org [mailto:owner-ccamp@ops.ietf.org]On
> > > > Behalf Of Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> > > > Sent: Wednesday, April 16, 2003 9:30 AM
> > > > To: Ccamp-wg (E-mail)
> > > > Subject: FW: draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Please consider these comments and let me know if they
> > > > wrrant some additional text in the ID.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > > Bert
> > > >
> > > > >***** o Tracing Requirements for Generic Tunnels (None)
> > > > > <draft-ietf-ccamp-tracereq-01.txt>
> > > > > Token: Wijnen, Bert
> > > > > Note: New revision Addresses comments.
> > > > > Now on IESG agenda for April 17th
> > > > > Responsible: Bert
> > > >
> > > > 1. this document looks like it might be the union of all the
> > > > "i want it to do <foo>" requests. an important part of
> > > > requirements documents is knowing what to not require.
> > > > do they have any?
> > >
> > > This document specifies requirements for a new protocol. It
> > specifies
> > > requirements, primarily, by detailing the required capabilities of
> > > applications that will use this protocol. The application
> > may implement
> > > some subset of those capabilities. It may also implement a
> > superset of
> > > the required capabilities. However, protocol designers are
> > not required
> > > to consider the additional capabilities when designing the protocol.
> > >
> > > I can add some text to this effect.
> > >
> > > > 2. i am concerned about the security stuff that they've buried in
> > > > their requirements. nothing definite. it seems unwieldy. but
> > > > then, so many security things do...
> > >
> > > Can you be more specific? Is there any particular requirement that
> > > you feel cannot be implemented?
> > >
> > > > 3. section 4.1 and 4.2 seem to be worded with a particular
> > > > implementation in mind. requirements documents ought not
> > > > specify solutions (eg, 4.2 talks about udp, why can't i use
> > > > icmp?)
> > >
> > > Section 4 provides a few protocol requirements, stated as such. In
> > > particular, Section 4.1 states that the new protocol will consist of
> > > probes and responses, and that each probe/response pair will reveal
> > > information regarding a network hop. (In this respect, the
> > new protocol
> > > will resemble TRACEROUTE).
> > >
> > > Had I remembered to include an application requirement to
> > support partial
> > > traces through broken paths, this requirement would have
> > made much more
> > > sense!
> > > I will fix this.
> > >
> > > Section 4.2 requires that the protocol be implemented over
> > UDP. I included
> > > this
> > > section primarily to rule out implmentations that were _not_
> > > acceptable. For
> > > example,
> > > ICMP should not be used, because carrying MPLS information
> > over ICMP would
> > > constitute
> > > a layer violation. TCP should not be used, because this would
> > > conflict with
> > > the protocol's
> > > requirement for statelessness. Tunnel specific mechanisms
> > should not be
> > > used, because
> > > this would conflict with the requirement for generality.
> > >
> > > This leaves UDP and IP as the two most resonable candidates.
> > >
> > > I can add some words indicating how we arrived at this decision.
> > >
> > > > 4. justification of requirements might be nice.
> > > >
> > >
> > > I can add a sentence or two after each requirement.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> >
>