Fw: AD-review comments on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-egress-control

["Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>]

Hi,

The AD (Alex) has reviewed this draft and just has a couple of editorial nits.
If the editor (Lou) would like to make the changes and re-submit, we can get the draft to
go forward.

Lou, please don't forget to run the draft through the IDnits script before submitting it.

Thanks,
Adrian

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Alex Zinin" <zinin@psg.com>

> Ed: please use the new ID boilerplates.
>
> > Abstract
> >
> >    This note clarifies the procedures for the control of the label used
> >    on a output/downstream interface of the egress node of a Label
> >    Switched Path (LSP).  Such control is also known as "Egress Control".
> >    Support for Egress Control is implicit in Generalized Multi-Protocol
> >    Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling.  This note does not modify GMPLS
> >    signaling mechanisms and procedures and should be viewed as an
> >    informative clarification of GMPLS Signaling - Resource ReserVation
> >    Protocol-Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE) Extensions.
>
> Given that the doc goes STD track, I suggest that the last sentence is
> changed to say "This note is a clarification update to the specification
> of GMPLS Signaling..."
>
> > Author's Note
> >
> >    This draft is targeted for publication as a BCP.
>
> This one should be removed for the same reason.