Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-lexicography-03.txt

["Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>]

Hi,

Just a quick note to explain the revisions in this I-D.

1. Restructure the main terminology section so that the GMPLS terms and
ASON terms are broken out into separate subsections.
2. Remodel the intro and wrap-up text to be more "positive".
3. Apply a few tweaks to GMPLS terms for clarity after discussion in the
ITU-T
4. Apply *most* of the changes to the ASON terms suggested in the liaison
from Study Group 15

The last point is limited to "most" because we had a couple of points
about which we weren't clear. We have sent mail to Ben Mack-Crane who is
acting as special envoy within SG15, and he will attempt to resolve the
questions for us. At the moment we are going to try to do this without
formal liaison, but the next revision (including any responses he sends)
will be sent back to SG15 formally.

As usual, we would really welcome the review of this document by GMPLS
experts and ASON experts. Comments may be sent provately to the authors or
on the CCAMP list.

Thanks,
Adrian