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Hi,
We have updated the draft-ietf-ccamp-gr-description-03.txt
according to the comments of GEN-ART's review, there is no technical changes.
We have done the following changes:
1) Added Snigdho Bardalai as an editor of this
draft
2) Some typo corrections:
Nits/editorial comments: - 4 page 7: P2MP -> point to multi-point - 5.2.2 page 10: Path_State_Reomved -> Path_State_Removed - 6 page 13 figure 2: resoure -> resource and resouces -> resources - 7 page 15: travelling -> traveling - 11 page 17: CA 95134 -> CA 95134 3) Updated the template of Section 12 and 13, which are Full Copyright Statement and Intellectual Property Statement The new version of this draft (04 version) has been
post.
Regards,
Authors
----- Original Message -----
From: Francis
Dupont
To: gen-art@ietf.org
Cc: danli@huawei.com ; gjhhit@huawei.com ; asatyana@cisco.com
; snigdho.bardalai@us.fujitsu.com
; rcallon@juniper.net
Sent: Friday, January 16, 2009 6:28 AM
Subject: review of
draft-ietf-ccamp-gr-description-03.txt reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gr-description-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2009-01-15 IETF LC End Date: 2009-01-20 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: there are 4 authors in 11 (Authors' Addresses) but 3 only in front (first page). I am afraid Snigdho Bardalai was forgotten during some edits... Nits/editorial comments: - 4 page 7: P2MP -> point to multi-point - 5.2.2 page 10: Path_State_Reomved -> Path_State_Removed - 6 page 13 figure 2: resoure -> resource and resouces -> resources - 7 page 15: travelling -> traveling - 11 page 17: CA 95134 -> CA 95134 Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr |