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[Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5420 (1689)



The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5420,
"Encoding of Attributes for MPLS LSP Establishment Using Resource Reservation Protocol Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE)".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5420&eid=1689

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 11.3, pg.19

Original Text
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a)
   The IANA has created a new registry and will manage the space of
|  attributes bit flags, numbering them in the usual IETF notation:
            ^
   starting at zero and continuing at least through 31.

b)
   Each bit should be tracked with the following qualities:

   - Bit number
   - Defining RFC
   - Name of bit
|  - Whether there is meaning in the Attribute Flags TLV on a Path
|  - Whether there is meaning in the Attribute Flags TLV on a Resv
   - Whether there is meaning in the RRO Attributes subobject



Corrected Text
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a)
   The IANA has created a new registry and will manage the space of
   attribute bit flags, numbering them in the usual IETF notation:
   starting at zero and continuing at least through 31.

b)
   Each bit should be tracked with the following qualities:

   - Bit number
   - Defining RFC
   - Name of bit
|  - Whether there is meaning in the Attribute Flags TLV on a Path message
|  - Whether there is meaning in the Attribute Flags TLV on a Resv message
   - Whether there is meaning in the RRO Attributes subobject


Notes
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Rationale:

a) grammar fix in the body of RFC 5420 vs. RFC 4420
   should also be reflected in the IANA Considerations
   (and in the IANA registry -- subject to independent report to IANA);

b) language improvement applied in the body of the RFC
   should also be reflected in the IANA Considerations.

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RFC5420 (draft-ietf-ccamp-rfc4420bis-03)
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Title               : Encoding of Attributes for MPLS LSP Establishment Using Resource Reservation Protocol Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE)
Publication Date    : February 2009
Author(s)           : A. Farrel, Ed., D. Papadimitriou, JP. Vasseur, A. Ayyangarps
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Common Control and Measurement Plane
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG