RE: Anotehr doc for this Thrusday's IESG call

["Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>]

Thanks Dan.
I will take that along with the evaluation

Thanks,
Bert 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:dromasca@avaya.com]
> Sent: woensdag 1 oktober 2003 12:12
> To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert); Mreview (E-mail)
> Subject: RE: Anotehr doc for this Thrusday's IESG call
> 
> 
> Just a couple of editorial nits:
> 
> Section 1.1 - should say probably 'USM-based <Security Model>
> Language in 1.3 and 4 seem to be inconsistent 'can be 
> suggested' and MUST do not play well for my English parser 
> (not the best in the world, of course)
> 
> Otherwise this looks fine.
> 
> Dan
> 
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) [mailto:bwijnen@lucent.com]
> > Sent: 30 September, 2003 1:04 AM
> > To: Mreview (E-mail)
> > Subject: Anotehr doc for this Thrusday's IESG call
> > 
> > 
> > Probably this doc will aslo be discussed for Proposed Std (PS)
> > 
> >    draft-blumenthal-aes-usm-07.txt
> > 
> > Any input/review comments will be appreciated.
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > Bert 
> > 
> > 
>