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Hi, I have a few comments. o 1.2 paragraph 3, "An
NETCONF server" should be "A NETCONF server".
^^ 6.1 contains a "An
NETCONF server" also. o 5.2 The first example:
<netconf:filter type="xpath"
select="event/eventClasses/fault' and
(event[severity='critical'] or
event[severity='major'] or
event[severity='minor')))"/>
^^^ Parentheses don't match. o 5.2 The second example is
wrong. The given filtering criteria are not consistent with the xpath filter. The first xpath clause
should be removed.
select="((event[eventClasses/fault] or
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ o I suggest that the naming
style of elements should be identical. There are two naming style in the draft.
For example, "named-profile" and "namedProfile". I prefer
"xxx-yyy" to "xxxYyy". Yan |