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Hi,
I find some trivial mistakes in this
revision.
o pg 3, ToC: Sec. 2.1 title: Capitalize
'receive'.
o pg 4, Figure 1: The vertical lines are untidy.
o pg 8, the first paragraph:
If the startTime specified is earlier then the log can support, ^^^^ 'then' should be 'than'. o pg 11, Sec. 3.1.2: The indent of elements are untidy. This
problem occurs throughout the document.
o pg 12, Figure 4 should be Figure 2.
o pg 22, Figure 8 should be Figure 3.
o pg 31, Sec. 5.2, the second
example:
The filtering criteria evaluation does not consist with the XPath _expression_. (( state | config) & ((fault & severity=critical) | (fault & ^ ^ ^ severity=major) | (fault & severity = minor) | (fault & card=Ethernet0))) <filter netconf:type="xpath"
select="//eventEntry[(eventClass='fault' and severity='minor') or (eventClass='fault' and severity='major') or (eventClass='fault' and severity='critical') or (eventClass='fault' and card='Ethernet0') or ^^ eventClass='state' or eventClass='config' ]"/> ^ ^ Yan
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