Re: Last-Call: comments on draft-ietf-psamp-framework-07.txt + draft-ietf-psamp-framework-08.txt

[Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>]

Maurizio,

> > 6. Section 5.2, under "Router State Filtering".
> > We know that the filtering definition says:
> >
> >        Filtering: a filter is a selection operation that selects a 
> >        packet deterministically based on the packet content, its 
> >        treatment, and functions of these occurring in the selection 
> >        state.
> >
> > We must add a note that the "Router State Filtering" only deals with 
> > the packet treatment part of the definition.
>
>
>
> Easier way out: put "or" in the definition. That is:
>
>        Filtering: a filter is a selection operation that selects a 
>        packet deterministically based on the packet content, or its 
>        treatment, or functions of these occurring in the selection 
>        state.

Nice improvement. That will do.
I still think that the little extra precision in the "Router State 
Filtering" section (expressing that it only deals with the packet 
treatment part of the definition) is worth adding.
Note that draft-ietf-psamp-sample-tech-04.txt must also be updated.

Regards, Benoit.

> Maurizio
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