RE: CUI - issues addressed in version 3

["Adrangi, Farid" <farid.adrangi@intel.com>]

Thanks so much Greg.  Will fix these in the next version.
BR,
Farid

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Greg Weber [mailto:gdweber@cisco.com] 
> Sent: Thursday, December 16, 2004 12:27 PM
> To: Adrangi, Farid
> Cc: radiusext@ops.ietf.org
> Subject: Re: CUI - issues addressed in version 3
> 
> 
> > 
> > Hi David, Bernard, Greg, Barney:
> > 
> > First, thanks again for reviewing the draft and submitting issues
> > against versions 1 and 2. It would be great if you can let us know
> > whether or not version 03 addresses the issues.    
> > 
> > Issues addressed in Version 3
> > =============================
> > Issue 13 (Owner: David Mariblanca)
> > Issue 14 (Owner: Bernard Aboba)
> > Issue 18 (Owner: Greg Weber)
> 
> Hi Farid,
> The current version of the draft addresses most of the editorial
> issues I mentioned for version -01.  Here are some exceptions:
> 
> Section 2.1
>   "Access Accept message" -> "Access-Accept message"
>   "Accounting Requests" -> "Accounting-Request"
>   "User-Name (1)" -> "User-Name(1)" (two places)
> Section 5
>   "Event-Timestamp" -> "Event-Timestamp(55)"
> 
> A couple other nits I see:
> 
> Abstract
>   "identity a user" -> "identify a user"
> Section 2.1
>   "CUI attribute the CUI attribute" -> "CUI attribute, the 
> CUI attribute"
>   Several occurances of multiple spaces between words, e.g.
>     "the  second  part  is  the"  
> Normative References
>   Each non-IETF reference seems to be missing something, e.g.
>     '...Plan", , May 1997'
>   
> Greg
> 
> > Issue 21 (Owner: Barney Wolff)
> > Issue 22 (Owner: Barney Wolff) 
> > 
> > The description of these issues can be found in in
> > http://www.drizzle.com/~aboba/RADEXT/#Issue%2014.
> > 
> > Thanks for your help.
> > 
> > BR,
> > Farid
> > 
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