Issue: Editorial comments on 3576 client MIB

["Greg Weber \(gdweber\)" <gdweber@cisco.com>]

Description of issue: Editorial comments on 3576 client MIB
Submitter name: Greg Weber
Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com
Date first submitted: June 5th, 2005
Reference: n/a
Document: draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-00.txt
Comment type: E
Priority: 1
Section: various
Rationale/Explanation of issue: Editorial pass

Requested changes:

Section 2
  "[RFC3576] ." -> "[RFC3576]."
Section 5
  #2: "that the DAC shares a secret with." ->
      "with which the DAC shares a secret."
Section 6
  radiusDynAuthClientMIB DESCRIPTION:
    "Remote Access Dialin User Service" ->
    "Remote Authentication Dial In User Service"
  radiusDynAuthServerClientPortNumber DESCRIPTION:
    "The UDP port the RADIUS" ->
    "The UDP destination port that the RADIUS"
  radius DynAuthClientRoundTripTime DESCRIPTION:
    "correponding" -> "corresponding"
  radiusDynAuthClientDisconBadAuthenticators DESCRIPTION:
    "which contained invalid Signature attributes" ->
    "which contained an invalid Response Authenticator"
  radiusDynAuthClientCoABadAuthenticators DESCRIPTION:
    "which contained invalid Signature attributes" ->
    "which contained an invalid Response Authenticator"
Section 7
  "the port number on which" ->
  "the destination port number to which"
Section 10.1
  [DYNSERV]: "Auhtorization" -> "Authorization"

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