Review of draft-lior-radext-end-to-end-caps-01.txt

[Barney Wolff <barney@databus.com>]

Some comments on draft-lior-radext-end-to-end-caps-01.txt :

1.1  s/different then/different than/
     s/ensure whether/discover whether/ or /ensure that/

2  The section should specify the ordering of bit-pairs in bytes,
that bit-pair numbering begins with zero, and that bit-pair value
01 is reserved and MUST NOT be sent.  Some statement should specify
the suggested action by the receiver of an invalid attribute value.

6  As each capability takes 2 bits, the correct max value is 1011,
not 2023.

7  Only the action of a proxy of different administrative domain
than that of the NAS or server should be restricted, imho.

9  s/helpfull/helpful/  s/Wolf/Wolff/

Regards,
Barney

-- 
Barney Wolff         http://www.databus.com/bwresume.pdf
I never met a computer I didn't like.

--
to unsubscribe send a message to radiusext-request@ops.ietf.org with
the word 'unsubscribe' in a single line as the message text body.
archive: <http://psg.com/lists/radiusext/>