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Issue: English usage
Description of issue: Poor English language usage
Submitter name: Glen Zorn
Submitter email address: gwz@cisco.com
Date first submitted: 14 Nov 05
Document: dynauth server MIB
Comment type: E
Priority: 1
Section: 7
Rationale/Explanation of issue: One comments upon a document, not to it.
Requested change:
Change "their comments to this document" to "their comments on this
document"
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