[Issue] Editorial nits on prefix delegation

["Greg Weber \(gdweber\)" <gdweber@cisco.com>]

Description of issue: Editorial cmts on prefix delegation
Submitter name: Greg Weber
Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com
Date first submitted: March 26th, 2006
Reference: n/a
Document: draft-ietf-radext-delegated-prefix-00.txt
Comment type: 'E'ditorial
Priority: '2' May fix
Section: 2 & 5
Rationale/Explanation of issue:

The draft looks ok to me.  A couple editorial nits:

Section 5:
  "IP SEC" -> "IPsec"

Section 2:
  The idnit checker at tools.ietf.org complains:
    Miscellaneous warnings:
    - The document seems to use RFC 2119 keywords, 
      but does not seem to contain the recommended 
      RFC 2119 boilerplate
   because the text of section 2 is not exactly like
   like the boilerplate in 2119 (missing quote marks).
  
Greg


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> Delegated-IPv6 
> Prefix Attribute"
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