RE: IESG review comments on the RADIUS Issues and Fixes draft

[Bernard Aboba <bernard_aboba@hotmail.com>]

You might define what is meant by an "authentication attribute" (e.g. EAP-Message, User-Password, etc.). 

> Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2007 14:16:20 +0200
> From: aland@nitros9.org
> To: dnelson@elbrysnetworks.com
> CC: radiusext@ops.ietf.org
> Subject: Re: IESG review comments on the RADIUS Issues and Fixes draft
> 
> David B. Nelson wrote:
> >>From the IETF ID-Tracker database:
> > 
> > Date and Time: 2007-07-03, 11:39:58 
> > Document: draft-ietf-radext-fixes 
> > Version: 04 
> > Commented by: Tim Polk 
> > Comment: I personally find this text in the last sentence in section 2.1.1
> > to be unclear: 
> > 
> > "neither including an authentication attribute nor a Service-Type attribute"
> 
> Suggested text:
> 
> As defined in [RFC 2865] Table 5.44, Access-Request packets MAY
> contain a State attribute. We extend that definition here, to say
> that Access-Request packets that contain an authentication attribute
> or a Service-Type attribute with the value Call Check (10) MAY contain
> a State attribute. Access-Request packets not matching the above
> description MUST contain a State attribute.
> 
> Alan DeKok.
> 
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