Re: Review of draft-ietf-radext-design-01.txt

[Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com>]

David B. Nelson wrote:
> Bernard Aboba writes...
> 
> There is some overlap in coverage.  My recommendation is to reorganize
> the discussion as follows:
...
> DBN: I think this text is very good.

  Updated as recommended.
...
> DBN:  I think this last sentence could be a bit more specific.  All
> attributes encode data.  The question is what kind of data.  I think what
> you want to say is:

  Updated

> DBN: I recommend clarifying this last sentence just a bit by:

  Updated.

  I'll post a new version before the meeting.

  Alan DeKok.

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