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I haven't read
your current draft version yet to see if these comments were addressed;
there was no response on the list -that I recall.
Probably not, since it was an individual submission & last time I checked the authors of such have no obligation to respond to the WG, which in turn has no control over the work.
Of course, since the draft is now a WG item I'd love to address your comments (if I could only see them ;-).
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