RE: draft-ietf-radext-crypto-agility-requirements-01

["David B. Nelson" <dnelson@elbrysnetworks.com>]

Here are some editorial nits that I received in a private e-mail message:

> (1)  Section 3
> 
> In the first line of the first paragraph, please correct the
> typo:     s/MD5-baed/MD5-based/  .
>                            ^
> 
> (2)  Section 4.6
> 
> The bullets from a grammar point of view are made up of a complete
> sentence each, and start with a capital letter.
> Consequently, a trailing period should be added to all (4) bullets.


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