Re: shim6-proto minor remarks

[marcelo bagnulo braun <marcelo@it.uc3m.es>]

thanks!

i will correct those in the next review

regards, marcelo

El 19/11/2007, a las 14:50, Matthijs Mekking escribió:

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> Hello,
>
> Just some minor remarks about the shim6-proto.
>
> MAX_UPDATE_TIMEOUT is not defined in Section 14, but is mentioned  
> in the
> draft.
>
> Some typo's:
> Page 9:   behaviour -> behavior (since the rest of the document also
>           uses 'beahvior')
> Page 42:  pruposes -> purposes
> Page 56:  unstrucutred -> unstructured
> Page 72:  recieve -> receive
> Page 78:  If CGA (and not HBA) is used to verify one or more fo the
>           locators included in the locator listfo the locators ->
>           remove the words 'fo the'
> Page 85:  extenson header -> extension header
> Page 85:  porpuses -> purposes
> Page 91:  presudoheader -> pseudoheader
> Page 98:  pruposes -> purposes
> Page 100: singly-homed -> single-homed
> Page 108: Tiemout -> Timeout (2x)
>
> Regards,
>
> Matthijs Mekking
> matthijs@nlnetlabs.nl
> Foundation NLnet Labs
>
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