Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-v6ops-application-transition-01.txt

["JORDI PALET MARTINEZ" <jordi.palet@consulintel.es>]

Hi,

Just found a couple of errors.

1. various kinds of transition mechanisms have been developed to migrate to IPv6 network
replace with "various kinds of transition mechanisms have been developed to do the transition to IPv6 networks"
or "various kinds of transition mechanisms have been developed for the transition to IPv6 networks"
(other combinations possible, key point is avoid using "migration/migrate", and probably use networks instead of network)

3.2 DNS does not indicate which the IP version will be used
replace with "DNS does not indicate which IP version will be used"

Regards,
Jordi

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of the IETF.
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> Title : Application Aspects of IPv6 Transition
> Author(s) : M. Shin
> Filename : draft-ietf-v6ops-application-transition-01.txt
> Pages : 30
> Date : 2004-2-13
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> As IPv6 networks are deployed and the network transition discussed,
> one should also consider how to enable IPv6 support in applications
> running on IPv6 hosts, and what is the best strategy to develop IP
> protocol support in applications.  This document specifies
> scenarios and aspects of application transition. It also proposes
> guidelines on how to develop IP version-independent applications
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