Proposal for Issue 10

The following editorial changes are proposed in RFC3012bis:

1. Update reference 7 from RFC 3320 to RFC 3344 and reference 9 from RFC 2138 to RFC 2865 in “Reference” section of RFC3012bis.
2. Replace the existing text with the new text mentioned below. Note that the actual issue is regarding section 3.4. But having reference of RFC 3344 in section 3 will cover all its subsections.

   Existing Text

   This section describes modifications to the Mobile IP registration process which may occur after the Foreign Agent issues a Mobile IP Agent Advertisement containing the Challenge on its local link. See appendix C for a diagram showing the canonical message flow for messages related to the processing of the Foreign Agent challenge values.

   New Text

   This section describes modifications to the Mobile IP registration process [7], which may occur after the Foreign Agent issues a Mobile IP Agent Advertisement containing the Challenge on its local link. See appendix C for a diagram showing the canonical message flow for messages related to the processing of the Foreign Agent challenge values.