Evaluation: draft-ietf-simple-winfo-package -

["Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>]

Subject: Evaluation: draft-ietf-simple-winfo-package - A Session 
	   Initiation Protocol (SIP)Event Template-Package for Watcher 
	   Information to Proposed Standard
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                    Yes    No-Objection  Discuss *  Abstain  


Bert Wijnen         [   ]     [   ]       [ X ]      [   ]


Document draft-ietf-simple-winfo-package-04.txt has improper examples:

SUBSCRIBE sip:joe@bar.com SIP/2.0
   Via: SIP/2.0/UDP pc34.bar.com;branch=z9hG4bKnashds7
   From: sip:joe@bar.com;tag=123aa9
   To: sip:joe@bar.com
   Call-ID: 9987@pc34.bar.com
   CSeq: 9887 SUBSCRIBE
   Contact: sip:joe@pc34.bar.com
   Event: presence.winfo
   Max-Forwards: 70

I do not see IPR sections, as required per our NITS document
and the RFC2026 rules. This I believe is true for all 3 documents

Thanks,
Bert