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Re: CORRECTION: Document Action: 'Terminology Used inInternationalization in the IETF' to Informational
> When I read the document, the text that Klensin cited did not
> jump out,
Exactly. Truth be told, I was more concerned with the actual definitions being
given than with the text surrounding them.
> but now the words about normativeness seem a bit
> legalistic, given the background of the community difficulties.
> Even if Randy does diplomacy, it might be a win-win thing for
> you to have an RFC-Editor note to change that part of the text,
> as the words are not useful and they do sow some confusion.
> Suggested rewording -
> Old:
> This document gives an overview of internationalization as it applies to
> IETF standards work by lightly covering the many aspects of
> internationalization and the vocabulary associated with those topics. It
> is not meant to be a complete description of internationalization. The
> definitions in this document are not normative for IETF standards;
> however, they are useful and standards may make non-normative reference
> to this document after it becomes an RFC.
> New:
> This document gives an overview of internationalization as it applies to
> IETF work in this area by lightly covering the many aspects of
> internationalization and the vocabulary associated with those topics. It
> is not meant to be a complete description of internationalization. The
> definitions in this document are purely informative for IETF standards,
> however, they are useful and this document should become a valuable
> resource for the IETF after it becomes an RFC.
I would also suggest changing "the many aspects" to "many aspects", per
Randy's note.
> Or something like this. I can see why Klensin felt this paragraph was
> skirting the border.
Agreed.
Ned