draft-nesser-otp-sha-256-384-512-02.txt

[Randy Bush <randy@psg.com>]

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>    2.2 Individual Submissions
>       2.2.1 New Item
> **         o Generating One-Time Passwords with SHA-256, SHA-384, and 
>              SHA-512 (Proposed Standard) 
>              <draft-nesser-otp-sha-256-384-512-02.txt>
>              Token: Housley, Russ

==> doesn't have the IPR considerations section

1.0 ABSTRACT

==> abstract is numbered.

Although the SHA-256, SHA-384 and SHA-512 alogrithms are still in their

==> s/alog/algo/

8.0  Neccessity of Implementation

==> s/cc/c/

9.0 SECURITY CONSIDERATIONS

==> some sections appear to be all-uppercase, while some are not

3.0 REQUIREMENTS TERMINOLOGY


==> any particular reason not to use RFC2119 terminology?

12.0 REFERENCES

[FIPS 180-2]  Secure Hash Standard:  A Revision of FIPS 180-1, August 2002

==> not split to normative/informative
==> should have a normative reference to RFC2289, at the very least!