Comments on draft-ietf-manet-olsr-10

[Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>]

Here are my comments on draft-ietf-manet-olsr-10

- move references from Abstract to Introduction

- turn off hyphenation

- drop section 1.1 and renumber the subsequent sections

- In section 20.1, provide a reference to at least one "regular 
cryptographic technique" for confidentiality

- In section 20.2, the phrase "Authenticated signatures on control 
messages" does not make sense.  It is not clear that digital signatures are 
needed; keyed message authentication codes are sufficient if the 
authentication does not need to persist over more than one hop.  Is IPsec 
ESP the expected solution?

Russ