draft-ietf-mpls-lc-if-mib-06.txt review (Was: Re: Please Review: Documents on IESG Agenda for September 15, 2005)

[Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>]

Wijnen, Bert (Bert) wrote:

>  o draft-ietf-mpls-lc-if-mib-06.txt
>    Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Label-Controlled ATM and Frame-Relay 
>    Management Interface Definition (Proposed Standard) - 1 of 3 
>    Token: Alex Zinin
>  
I reviewed this draft. It looks OK, but I'll admit that I know
very little about MPLS. Some nits were found, however:

>         is capabile of ATM VC merge, otherwise it MUST

s/capabile/capable/

>         MPLS-related configuration and/or performanc statistics. 

s/performanc/performance/

>         LSR is willing to accept unlabled traffic

s/unlabled/unlabeled/

>         where possible.  Specifically,SNMPv3 VACM and USM MUST be 

s/,/, /

--Jari