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RE: review question



I am with you. Pls repeat all the description stuff or use a 
special notification vaBind as Dave Perkins suggested.

Thanks,
Bert 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Harrie Hazewinkel [mailto:harrie@lisanza.net]
> Sent: zaterdag 5 juni 2004 13:55
> To: Mreview
> Cc: Harrie Hazewinkel
> Subject: review question
> 
> 
> HI,
> 
> 
> I have been reviewing the draft-ietf-ipcdn-docsisevent-mib-03.txt.
> In there the following approach is used.
> 
> All notifications contain a set of objects/varbinds that are common
> to all and some are type specific. Some definitions are below.
> In the DESCRIPTION-clause of only the first one is the complete
> semantics/description given for the common varbinds. All others do
> 'assume; it is there. Do we consider this a good approach.
> 
> Personally, I do not think so, but directly saying the description
> must always be repeated I am not sure if people would like that.
> I would like to know what others believe is best.
> 
> 
> regards,
> Harrie
> 
>     docsDevCmInitTLVUnknownTrap NOTIFICATION-TYPE
>         OBJECTS {
>             docsDevEvLevel,
>             docsDevEvId,
>             docsDevEvText,
>             ifPhysAddress,
>             docsIfCmCmtsAddress,
>             docsIfDocsisBaseCapability,
>             docsIfCmStatusDocsisOperMode,
>             docsIfCmStatusModulationType
>         }
>         STATUS current
>         DESCRIPTION
>             "Event due to detection of unknown TLV during
>              the TLV parsing process.
> 
>              The values of docsDevEvLevel, docsDevId, and
>              docsDevEvText are from the entry which logs this event
>              in the docsDevEventTable. The docsIfDocsisBaseCapability
>              indicates the DOCSIS version information. The
>              docsIfCmStatusDocsisOperMode indicates the QOS level of
>              the CM, while the docsIfCmStatusModulationType indicates
>              the upstream modulation methodology used by the CM.
>              The ifPhysAddress value is the MAC address of the cable
>              interface of this cable modem.
>              The docsIfCmCmtsAddress specifies the MAC address
>              of the CMTS to which the CM is connected to(if 
> there is a 
> cable
>              card/ interface in the CMTS, then it is actually the MAC 
> address
>              of the cable interface which connected to the CM).
>              This part of information is uniformed across all 
> CM traps.
>             "
>         ::= { docsDevCmTraps 1 }
> 
>     docsDevCmDynServReqFailTrap NOTIFICATION-TYPE
>         OBJECTS {
>             docsDevEvLevel,
>             docsDevEvId,
>             docsDevEvText,
>             ifPhysAddress,
>             docsIfCmCmtsAddress,
>             docsIfDocsisBaseCapability,
>             docsIfCmStatusDocsisOperMode,
>             docsIfCmStatusModulationType
>         }
>         STATUS current
>         DESCRIPTION
>             "An event to report the failure of a dynamic service
>              request happened during the dynamic services process.
>             "
>         ::= { docsDevCmTraps 2 }
> 
>