review for: draft-ietf-ospf-mib-update-09.txt [wasRE: PRELIMINARY Agenda and Package for April 13, 2006 Telechat ]

["Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>]

Dan, I reviewed this one back in November as MIB Doctor.
My comments have been addressed and/or answered.

So basically I am basically happy with this one.

But I see:
   E: f(ospftrap.mi2), (518,22) Group "ospfTrapControlGroup" is 
   both a MANDATORY and conditional group for module "OSPF-TRAP-MIB"
I think it is OK, because of the 2 module compliance statements.

A few nits remain (RFC-Editor can fix):

!! Missing Reference for citation: [24]
  P086 L046:     explained in RFC 1224 [24]. The basic premise of the throttling

!! Missing citation for Informative reference:
  P101 L011:      [RFC1765] Moy, J., "OSPF Database Overflow", RFC 1765, March 1995.

!! Missing citation for Informative reference:
  P101 L013:      [RFC1793] Moy, J., "Extending OSPF to Support Demand Circuits",

!! Missing citation for Informative reference:
  P101 L019:      [RFC2328] Moy, J., "OSPF Version 2", RFC 2328, April 1998.

!! Missing citation for Informative reference:
  P101 L021:      [RFC2370] Coltun, R., "The OSPF Opaque LSA Option", RFC 2370,

!! Missing citation for Normative reference:
  P100 L055:      [RFC2863] McCloghrie, K., Kastenholtz, F.,

!! Missing citation for Informative reference:
  P101 L024:      [RFC3101] Murphy, P., "The OSPF Not-So-Stubby Area (NSSA) Option",

Bert

> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-mreview@ops.ietf.org [mailto:owner-mreview@ops.ietf.org]On
> Behalf Of Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> Sent: Friday, April 07, 2006 10:07
> To: Mreview (E-mail)
> Subject: FW: PRELIMINARY Agenda and Package for April 13, 
> 2006 Telechat 
> 
> 
>  
> Below is the preliminary agenda for the April 13, 2006 IESG telechat.
> Please review the documents that are of interest for you and 
> our group,
> and let me know any comments and issues until Wednesday April 12, COB
> the latest. 
> 
> Thanks and Regards,
> 
> Dan