Re: comments on requirements draft

[Geoff Huston <gih@telstra.net>]

nit upon nit...

>Here are some comments on the -01 version of the multi6 requirements
>draft.
>
>
> >Abstract
> >
> >   Multihoming is an essential component of service for enterprises [3]
> >   which are part of the Internet.  Existing IPv4 multi-homing...
>
>"Multihoming" is used before it is defined.  How about something like
>the following:
>
>     Multihoming, that is, connecting to more than one IP service
>     provider, is an essential component for enterprises...


"essential"?

Not necessarily essential, but sometimes desirable.

How about:

"Multihoming, that is, connecting to more than one IP service provider for 
IP access and transit services is used by enterprises .....


Geoff