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Response to various comments from Russ Housley
> Date and Time: 2004-01-22, 10:45:13
> Version: 03
> Commented by: Housley, Russ
> State before Comment: 0
> State after Comment: 0
> Comment: Delete last sentence in Abstract.
>
> Replace 'insure' with 'ensure' throughtout the document.
OK. Done. But http://www.m-w.com/cgi-bin/dictionary?book=Dictionary&va=ensure
claims that they are interchangable in most situations.
> The
> document uses [PKCS.3.1993] as a reference for Diffie-Hellman. It
> should also reference RFC 2631.
Done.
> Use of '*must*' ought to be replaced with either 'must' or 'MUST'.
The use of "*must*" in the justificaiton section was not a requirement
per se. Justification has been reworded without "must":
2.3.1 Support a 'Console' interface
Justification. There are times when it is operationally necessary
to be able to immediately and easily access a device for management
or configuration, even
> Delete the last paragraph of
> Appendix B. It begins: 'Version: $Id:'
Gone.
---George Jones