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Response to various comments from Russ Housley



> Date and Time: 2004-01-22, 10:45:13
> Version: 03
> Commented by: Housley, Russ
> State before Comment: 0
> State after Comment: 0
> Comment:   Delete last sentence in Abstract.
>
>   Replace 'insure' with 'ensure' throughtout the document.

OK. Done.  But http://www.m-w.com/cgi-bin/dictionary?book=Dictionary&va=ensure
claims that they are interchangable in most situations.

>  The
> document uses [PKCS.3.1993] as a reference for Diffie-Hellman.  It
> should also reference RFC 2631.

Done.

> Use of '*must*' ought to be replaced with either 'must' or 'MUST'.

The use of "*must*" in the justificaiton section was not a requirement
per se.  Justification has been reworded without "must":

   2.3.1 Support a 'Console' interface

   Justification. There are times when it is operationally necessary
   to be able to immediately and easily access a device for management
   or configuration, even

>  Delete the last paragraph of

> Appendix B.  It begins: 'Version: $Id:'

Gone.

---George Jones