[Issue 15] Editorial NITs with RFC 2486bis-01

[Bernard Aboba <aboba@internaut.com>]

Issue 15: Editorial NITs with RFC 2486bis-01
Submitter: Bernard Aboba
Submitter email address: aboba@internaut.com
Date first submitted: October 29, 2004
Reference:
Document: RFC2486bis-01
Comment type: E
Priority: S
Section: Various
Rationale/Explanation of issue:

Section 1.1:  You need an extra line space between definitions.  For
example, change:

" This document frequently uses the following terms:
Network Access Identifier"

To:
" This document frequently uses the following terms:

Network Access Identifier"

Change: "ISP- provided" to "ISP-provided"

Section 3, 4 and 5 probably do not require a page break (e.g. can start in
the middle of the page).

There is no reference to [8] in the document (RFC 2486).

BTW, what is the status of the SASLPrep document?

The reference is normative, meaning that RFC 2486bis can't be published
until it is resolved.


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