RE: REMINDER: RADEXT WG last call on RFC 2486bis-02

["Glen Zorn \(gwz\)" <gwz@cisco.com>]

Description of issue: Grammar problem
Submitter name: Glen Zorn
Submitter email address: gwz@cisco.com
Date first submitted: 30 Nov 2004
Document: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2486bis-02.txt
Comment type: E
Priority: 2
Section: Appendix B.
Rationale/Explanation of issue: Possible grammar problem
Lengthy description of problem: The sentence "Thanks [...] for Farid
Adrangi and others for suggesting mediating network representation
in NAIs." just doesn't sound right.

Requested change: CHANGE
"Thanks to Glen Zorn for many useful discussions of this problem
space, and for Farid Adrangi and others for suggesting mediating
network representation in NAIs."
TO
"Thanks to Glen Zorn for many useful discussions of this problem
space, and to Farid Adrangi and others for suggesting the
representation of mediating networks in NAIs."


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