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Issue: Cmts on 2618-21bis MIBs



Description of issue: Minor editorial cmts
Submitter name: Greg Weber
Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com
Date first submitted: November 9th, 2005
Reference: N/A
Document: 
  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-01.txt
  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2619bis-01.txt
  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2620bis-01.txt
  draft-ietf-radext-rfc2621bis-01.txt
Comment type: 'E' Editorial
Priority: '2' May fix
Section: See below
Rationale/Explanation of issue: Typos
Length description of problem: 
  I reread the docs.  They look fine to me with the exception of the
  typos mentioned below (some of which Alan has already mentioned).
Requested changes:

draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-01.txt
  p10, radiusAuthClientPendingRequests: Acess -> Access
  p12, radiusAuthServerInetAddress: adddess -> address
  p14, radiusAuthClientExtPendingRequests: Acess -> Access
  p17, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS
       (See Section 2.1, #3 of http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html)
  p18, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec

draft-ietf-radext-rfc2619bis-01.txt
  p14, radiusAuthClientInetAddress: adddess -> address
  p19, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS
  p19, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec
  
draft-ietf-radext-rfc2620bis-01.txt
  p11, radiusAccServerInetAddress: adddess -> address
  p16, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS
  p17, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec

draft-ietf-radext-rfc2621bis-01.txt
  p13, radiusAccClientInetAddress: adddess -> address
  p18, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS
  p18, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec


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