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Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs
Description of issue: Minor editorial cmts
Submitter name: Greg Weber
Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com
Date first submitted: November 9th, 2005
Reference: N/A
Document:
draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
Comment type: 'E' Editorial
Priority: '2' May fix
Section: See below
Rationale/Explanation of issue: Typos
Length description of problem:
I reread the docs. They look fine to me with the exception of the
typos mentioned below.
Requested changes:
draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
p7, radiusDynAuthServerMIB:
Remote Access Dialin User Service ->
Remote Authentication Dial In User Service
p11, radiusDynAuthServDisconAuthOnlyRequests:
Autorize -> Authorize
p12, radiusDynAuthServDisconNakAuthOnlyRequests:
Autorize -> Authorize
p14, radiusDynAuthServCoAAuthOnlyRequests:
Autorize -> Authorize
p15, radiusDynAuthServCoANakAuthOnlyRequests:
Autorize -> Authorize
p19, radiusDynAuthServerAuthOnlyGroup:
Autorize -> Authorize
p21, Section 5: IPSec -> IPsec
draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
p1, Abstract: RFC3576 -> RFC 3576
p10, radiusDynAuthClientDisconAuthOnlyRequests:
Autorize -> Authorize
p11, radiusDynAuthClientDisconNakAuthOnlyRequest:
Autorize -> Authorize
p14, radiusDynAuthClientCoAAuthOnlyRequest:
Autorize -> Authorize
p15, radiusDynAuthClientCoANakAuthOnlyRequest:
Autorize -> Authorize
p19, radiusDynAuthClientAuthOnlyGroup:
Autorize -> Authorize
p21, Section 5: IPSec -> IPsec
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