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RE: Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs
Thank you Greg for your review. Apparently new changes in this draft
have got these typos and we'll update.
Thanks
Nagi.
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org
> [mailto:owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org] On Behalf Of Greg Weber
> (gdweber)
> Sent: Thursday, November 10, 2005 7:54 AM
> To: radiusext@ops.ietf.org
> Subject: Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs
>
>
> Description of issue: Minor editorial cmts Submitter name:
> Greg Weber Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com Date
> first submitted: November 9th, 2005
> Reference: N/A
> Document:
> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
> Comment type: 'E' Editorial
> Priority: '2' May fix
> Section: See below
> Rationale/Explanation of issue: Typos
> Length description of problem:
> I reread the docs. They look fine to me with the exception of the
> typos mentioned below.
> Requested changes:
>
> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
> p7, radiusDynAuthServerMIB:
> Remote Access Dialin User Service ->
> Remote Authentication Dial In User Service
> p11, radiusDynAuthServDisconAuthOnlyRequests:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p12, radiusDynAuthServDisconNakAuthOnlyRequests:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p14, radiusDynAuthServCoAAuthOnlyRequests:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p15, radiusDynAuthServCoANakAuthOnlyRequests:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p19, radiusDynAuthServerAuthOnlyGroup:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p21, Section 5: IPSec -> IPsec
>
> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
> p1, Abstract: RFC3576 -> RFC 3576
> p10, radiusDynAuthClientDisconAuthOnlyRequests:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p11, radiusDynAuthClientDisconNakAuthOnlyRequest:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p14, radiusDynAuthClientCoAAuthOnlyRequest:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p15, radiusDynAuthClientCoANakAuthOnlyRequest:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p19, radiusDynAuthClientAuthOnlyGroup:
> Autorize -> Authorize
> p21, Section 5: IPSec -> IPsec
>
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