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RE: Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs



Thank you Greg for your review. Apparently new changes in this draft
have got these typos and we'll update.

Thanks
Nagi. 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org 
> [mailto:owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org] On Behalf Of Greg Weber 
> (gdweber)
> Sent: Thursday, November 10, 2005 7:54 AM
> To: radiusext@ops.ietf.org
> Subject: Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs
> 
> 
> Description of issue: Minor editorial cmts Submitter name: 
> Greg Weber Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com Date 
> first submitted: November 9th, 2005
> Reference: N/A
> Document: 
>   draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
>   draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
> Comment type: 'E' Editorial
> Priority: '2' May fix
> Section: See below
> Rationale/Explanation of issue: Typos
> Length description of problem: 
>   I reread the docs.  They look fine to me with the exception of the
>   typos mentioned below.
> Requested changes:
> 
> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
>   p7, radiusDynAuthServerMIB:
>     Remote Access Dialin User Service -> 
>     Remote Authentication Dial In User Service
>   p11, radiusDynAuthServDisconAuthOnlyRequests: 
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p12, radiusDynAuthServDisconNakAuthOnlyRequests:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p14, radiusDynAuthServCoAAuthOnlyRequests:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p15, radiusDynAuthServCoANakAuthOnlyRequests:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p19, radiusDynAuthServerAuthOnlyGroup:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p21, Section 5: IPSec -> IPsec
> 
> draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
>   p1, Abstract:  RFC3576 -> RFC 3576
>   p10, radiusDynAuthClientDisconAuthOnlyRequests:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p11, radiusDynAuthClientDisconNakAuthOnlyRequest:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p14, radiusDynAuthClientCoAAuthOnlyRequest:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p15, radiusDynAuthClientCoANakAuthOnlyRequest:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p19, radiusDynAuthClientAuthOnlyGroup:
>     Autorize -> Authorize
>   p21, Section 5:  IPSec -> IPsec
> 
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