RE: A plan for moving forward on the RFC 3576 MIB Documents

["Nelson, David" <dnelson@enterasys.com>]

The following I-D Nits issues were detected:

idnits 1.85 

tmp/draft-decnodder-radext-dynauth-server-mib-03.txt:


  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
    
    Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate...

  * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.1 IPR Disclosure
    Acknowledgement. 

    RFC 3978 Section 5.1 text:
    "By submitting this Internet-Draft, each author represents that any
    applicable patent or other IPR claims of which he or she is aware
    have been or will be disclosed, and any of which he or she becomes
    aware will be disclosed, in accordance with Section 6 of BCP 79."

  * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line --
    however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate
error?

    RFC 3978 Section 5.4 paragraph 1 text:
    "Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2006)."
  
    ... text found in draft:
    "Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2005).  This document is
subject
............................................^
    to the rights, licenses and restrictions contained in BCP 78, and
    except as set forth therein, the authors retain all their rights.")


  * The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Reference to BCP
78. 

    RFC 3978 Section 5.4 paragraph 2 text:
    "This document is subject to the rights, licenses and restrictions
    contained in BCP 78, and except as set forth therein, the authors
    retain all their rights."

  * The document uses RFC 3667 boilerplate or RFC 3978-like boilerplate
    instead of verbatim RFC 3978 boilerplate.  After 6 May 2005,
submission of
    drafts without verbatim RFC 3978 boilerplate is not accepted.

    The following non-3978 patterns matched text found in the document. 
    That text should be removed or replaced:

    "This document is an Internet-Draft and is subject to all provisions
    of [Ss]ection 3 of [RFC.3667]."

    "By submitting this Internet-Draft, each author represents that any
    applicable patent or other IPR claims of which he or she is aware
    have been or will be disclosed, and any of which he or she becomes
    aware will be disclosed, in accordance with [Ss]ection 6 of BCP 79."


  Checking nits according to
http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
    Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of
    1id-guidelines.txt yet).

  Miscellaneous warnings:
    None.



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