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REMINDER: RADEXT WG review of draft-nelson-radius-management-authorization

The WG review request ends on August 16, 2007. So far we have had only person express interest - not enough to adopt this document as a WG work item. Please post to the list if you support taking this on as a WG work item (even if you have no comments to post). 



From: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@alcatel-lucent.com>
To: <dnelson@enterasys.com>, <gdweber@cisco.com>
CC: <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>, "Bernard Aboba" <bernard_aboba@hotmail.com> Subject: RE: [Isms] [bernard_aboba@hotmail.com: Review o fdraft-nelson-radius-management-authorization-05.txt] 
Date: Tue, 14 Aug 2007 11:35:43 +0200

Some nits:

Sect 4

   The local application of the Management-Policy-Id within the managed
   entity may take the form of (a) one of an enumeration of command
   privilege levels, (b) a mapping into an SNMP View Based Access
   Control Method (VACM) table [RFC3415], or (c) some other set of

Did you intend to writhe "Method", or do you mean "Model"?
VACM stands for View Based Access Control Model in the SNMP context.

Sect 7.3
   The Text field is one or more octets, and its contents are
   implementation dependent.  It is intended to be human readable and
   MUST NOT affect operation of the protocol.  It is recommended that
   the message contain UTF-8 encoded 10646 [RFC2279] characters.

The latest RFC for UTF-8 is RFC3629.
I guess it is better reference that one.

I can support this work item as a topic for the RADEXT WG.
Not sure how much I can contribute though, but I will try to review
revisions of the document

Bert Wijnen




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