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Cmts on ExtAttrs-05
- To: "Glen Zorn" <glenzorn@comcast.net>, radiusext@ops.ietf.org
- Subject: Cmts on ExtAttrs-05
- From: "Greg Weber" <gdweber@gmail.com>
- Date: Thu, 6 Nov 2008 17:55:52 -0500
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Editorial cmts on ExtAttrs-05
Submitter name: Greg Weber
Submitter email address: gdweber@gmail.com
Date first submitted: Nov 6, '08
Reference: none
Document: draft-ietf-radext-extended-attributes-05.txt
Comment type: 'E'ditorial
Priority: 'S' Must fix
Section: various
Rationale/Explanation of issue:
A couple editorial comments on the current (-05) extended attributes draft:
Section 5, under More bit description:
"exceeds 246 octets" -> "exceeds 245 octets"
Section 5, under Ext-Len description:
">=3." -> ">=4."
Figure 3: the second Ext-Type's value:
"(0x00" -> "(0x01)"
Figure 4: I think the very last two octet values swapped.
Figure 4: The third attribute in this figure violates this earlier
MUST from section 4:
"If an Extended Attribute contains more than one TLV then all of the
encapsulated
TLVs MUST fit completely within the Extended Attribute."
Not sure if this is a problem with the text or the example -or maybe
just wording.
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