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Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-shim6-applicability-03.txt
Hi Brian,
thanks for the feedback
El 17/07/2007, a las 11:59, Brian E Carpenter escribió:
This draft looks good to me on content; the English needs a
check.
If you could be more specific on this i could try to fix it...
One comment:
4.3. Traffic Engineering
...
There is no defined mechanism which would allow use of
the Locator Preferences option amongst a site full of hosts to be
managed centrally.
It might be worth noting that RFC 4384 policy is also available
as a primitive TE tool, with at least one mechanism for site-wide
distribution of that policy existing in draft.
ok, we can include some text about this in the next version
One more question: do you think we should include other sections or
address other issues in here? For instance, one option would be to
"borrow" some text on application considerations from Erik expired
drafts and describe the referrals, call backs and so on. Imho these
are interesting conclusions we achieved in this work, and i would
like to reflect them somewhere...
Regards, marcelo
Brian