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Re: FW: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt
Hi Jim,
It looks good to go.
Very minor comment (can be ignored if we want to get the draft published :)
Perhaps Section 3.1 could be clearer - is the correct interpretation:
Scenario 1: Wide-scale/total dual-stack deployment of IPv4 and IPv6 capable
hosts and network infrastructure.
Scenario 2: Sparse IPv6 dual-stack deployment in IPv4 network infrastructure.
Scenario 3: IPv6-only network infrastructure with some IPv4-capable
nodes/applications needing to communicate over the IPv6 infrastructure.
If so, then
" Scenario 3: Enterprise deploying a new network or re-structuring an
existing network, decides IPv6 is the basis for
most network communication, to coexist with IPv4."
might be better as:
" Scenario 3: Enterprise deploying a new network or re-structuring an
existing network, decides IPv6 is the basis for most network
communication. Some IPv4 capable nodes/applications will
need to communicate over that infrastructure.
Or is that the wrong intepretation?
Finally, how does communication between IPv4-only and IPv6-only nodes or
applications fit into the above three scenarios, if any of them? Would
that be part of Scenario 3? Perhaps make that clearer?
Section 3.1 is actually quite heavily the key in which mechanisms are
favoured, so the wording is very important.
Tim
On Tue, Jun 29, 2004 at 12:30:26AM -0400, Bound, Jim wrote:
> WG,
>
> Chairs asked me to send this note to you. Updated spec below. First
> error below I am just the editor see authors in the spec. What we did
> and I as editor is took 100% Alain's and Pekka's input as best we could
> for additional clarity. But, in section 4 we put additional note that
> this section is more of an overview that the reader must look at as
> components and all the components would fill up many pages (as all
> scenarios) and more of that is analysis as opposed to defining a
> scenario, and analysis is the next step. We also added normative
> references we felt were applicable to the spec that exist and talk about
> the general subject (e.g. DNS, Applications). I as one author may not
> be able to respond to mail this week as I am abroad in Europe, but will
> do my best.
>
> Regards,
> /jim
>
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> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of the
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> Title : IPv6 Enterprise Network Scenarios
> Author(s) : J. Bound
> Filename : draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-scenarios-03.txt
> Pages : 16
> Date : 2004-6-28
>
> This document describes the scenarios for IPv6 deployment within
> Enterprise networks. It will focus upon an Enterprise set of network
> base scenarios with assumptions, coexistence with legacy IPv4 nodes,
> networks, and applications, and network infrastructure requirements.
> These requirements will be used to provide analysis to determine a set
> of Enterprise solutions in a later document.
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