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more comments on zeroconf draft



Hi Karen,
  Please find more comments on the draft:
 
 
section 9.1
"...drop policies, either simple drop all protocol-41 policies or more..."
                                                                             ^^^^^^^^^
=> Packets you mean?
 
Section 9.2
"

   Here it is implicitly assumed that the tunnel server(s) take the role

   of default routers and the end-nodes using Zero-Configuration

   Tunneling for IPv6 connectivity the role of hosts in multi-access

   environments.

"
=> For sake clarity can we re-phrase this paragraph as follows?

   "Here it is implicitly assumed that:

    - the tunnel server(s) take the role of default routers 

    - the end-nodes which use Zero-Configuration Tunneling for IPv6

       connectivity assume the role of hosts in multi-access environments."