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Re: REVIEW NEEDED: draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-analysis-00.txt (fwd)
Hello,
<Chair hat on>
I'm wondering why there are no comments to this draft. To kick-off the
discussion I'm going to provide some of my own. However, please, comment
the draft! We cannot move forward if people don't comment!
<Chair hat off>
I'm not going to comment much on the details. As it is the first
version, I'm just trying to express my opinion on the general direction
of the draft.
First of all, there is a lot of information in the draft about how the
transition/deployment of IPv6 in enterprise environment is to be done.
However, the conclusions seem not to be clearly derivable from the text.
I think the goal of the document is to have clear conclusions what is
expected from the IETF to be done (nothing - everything is already done,
requirements for transition protocols/mechanisms, identifying the
protocol needed).
I think this is somewhat in the document, but not clearly enough. So,
what I would like to see is more clearly the link between the actual
text of the document and the conclusions in the section 8. At least to
me it is not clear how the conclusions have been reached.
Cheers,
Jonne.
On Mon, 2004-09-27 at 12:29, ext Pekka Savola wrote:
> Folks,
>
> (co-chair hat on)
>
> There haven't been any reviews on the list. That's not good. We need
> the reviews to make this go forward. Otherwise we cannot go forward
> with this, and we cannot go forward with the transition mechanisms for
> the enterprises.
>
> PLEASE provide feedback ASAP!
>
> (co-chair hat off)
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> Date: Sat, 18 Sep 2004 21:24:32 +0300 (EEST)
> From: Pekka Savola <pekkas@netcore.fi>
> To: v6ops@ops.ietf.org
> Subject: REVIEW NEEDED: draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-analysis-00.txt
>
> Hi,
>
> (co-chair hat on)
>
> This is the initial draft on Enterprise network analysis, and is still
> being improved. We need input from the WG to make it better. Please
> read and comment ASAP, preferably within a week. We hope to get this
> in the shape for WG last call reasonably soon.
>
> Again, please send feedback. This is very important work!
>
> (hat off)
>
>
> On Thu, 16 Sep 2004 Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the IPv6 Operations Working Group of the IETF.
> >
> > Title : IPv6 Enterprise Network Analysis
> > Author(s) : J. Bound, et al.
> > Filename : draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-analysis-00.txt
> > Pages : 30
> > Date : 2004-9-16
> >
> > This document analyzes the transition to IPv6 in enterprise
> > networks. These networks are characterized as a network that has
> > multiple internal links, one or more router connections, to one or
> > more Providers, and is managed by a network operations entity. The
> > analysis will focus on a base set of transition units and
> > requirements expanded from a previous Enterprise Scenarios
> > document, and will depict a set of components and transition
> > methods required for the enterprise to transition to IPv6 within
> > each scenario and then common to all scenarios.
> >
> > A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-v6ops-ent-analysis-00.txt
> [...]
>
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Jonne Soininen
Nokia
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E-mail: jonne.soininen@nokia.com