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RE: Request for review: draft-huston-ip6-iana-registry-01.txt
On 15 December 2004 04:20, owner-v6ops@ops.ietf.org () wrote:
> draft-huston-ip6-iana-registry-01.txt
> We would very much welcome your comments to improve this document.
Overall this document looks good to me, and it is certainly needed. A
few comments:
"[3] The IPv6 Unicast space encompasses the entire IPv6 address
range
with the exception of FF00::/8."
... and FE80::/10, and soon to be FC00::/7 - might be easier to remove
this sentence altogether.
"The proposed registry format for Global Unicast IPv6 address
block
allocations is indicated in Figure 2 (Figure 1)."
- I guess this should read "(Figure 2)."
"[4] The is an experimental allocation to the 6BONE [RFC2471].
Per
[RFC3701] this prefix will be returned to the
unassigned address
pool on the 6th June 2006."
- replace "The" with "3FFE::/16"
" o The registry continuation lines with three full stops have
been
removed."
- replace "three full stops" with "ellipsis"
Regards,
Mat