Re: comment on draft-ietf-v6ops-bb-deployment-scenarios-01.txt on the cabe modem section

[Alain Durand <alain@tycool.net>]

On Apr 12, 2005, at 3:39 PM, Adeel Ahmed wrote:

>  Hello Alain,
>
>  Thank you for reviewing our draft and providing feedback. Please see 
> my responses inline with @@@@@:
>
>  At 04:58 PM 4/8/2005 -0700, Alain Durand wrote:
>
> I have some comments on the cable modem scenario.
>
>  - the various sub-scenarios have a lot in common. The way there are 
> described in full one by one makes
>  that there is a lot of redundant text. Grouping commonalities in one 
> section and ten, for each sub-case,
>  describing what is different would make the document easier to read.
>
>  @@@@@
>  This issue has been discussed in the past and per agreement from the 
> WG we would like to keep the format of the different sections as is.
>  @@@@@


I understand that you'd like to keep the different sections as 
independent ones.
My comment is targeted at the cable section itself and its sub-sections.
I will strongly encourage you and the wg to revisit your position as
this particular section is real hard to read as it is now.

	- Alain.