Re: draft-chiba-radius-dynamic-authorization

[Bernard Aboba <aboba@internaut.com>]

Done.

On Wed, 16 Apr 2003, Russ Housley wrote:

> I have a few comments on draft-chiba-radius-dynamic-authorization.
>
> 1.  Section 2.3 includes the following sentence: "The Identifier field MUST
> be changed whenever the content of the Attributes field changes, and
> whenever a valid reply has been received for a previous request."  I think
> that "and" should be "or."
>
> 2.  In section 5.3, in the one place, please change "IPSEC" to "IPsec".
>
> 3.  In section 5.3, please spell out the first use of "CA".  It needs to be
> "Certification Authority."
>
> 4.  In section 5.3, please use "trust anchor" instead of "trusted
> root."  Also, RFC 3280 should be referenced as a definition for trust
> anchor and certification path processing.
>
> Russ
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