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RE: Conference call on draft-ietf-aaa-diameter-mobileip-14.txt
My comments were only nits.
They have been addressed except for the fact that
the reference to RFC2119 is still listed as informative,
while (as far as I know) the IESG believes it should
be listed as a normative reference.
Can be done by an RFC-Editor note or during 48-hour authors call.
So I won't dial in into the call.
Thanks,
Bert
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Bernard Aboba [mailto:aboba@internaut.com]
> Sent: zaterdag 10 mei 2003 17:55
> To: iesg@ietf.org
> Cc: aaa-editors@internaut.com
> Subject: Conference call on draft-ietf-aaa-diameter-mobileip-14.txt
>
>
> A new version of this draft has been submitted, which
> attempts to address
> the IESG comments relating to -13. I'd like to propose a
> conference call to
> discuss the changes and any remaining IESG concerns. The AAA
> issues list
> is available at:
>
> http://www.drizzle.com/~aboba/AAA/issues.html
>
> Possible dates and times include:
> 8 AM Friday, May 16
> 8 AM Monday, May 19
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> On Sun, 27 Apr 2003, Tony Johansson wrote:
>
> > Bernard, All,
> >
> > Here is an updated alpha1 of the MIPv4 draft, including changes that
> > address Issue 385, 386 and 393
> > (http://www.drizzle.com/~aboba/AAA/issues.html ). Issue 386 is only
> > partly addressed, since some of the comments are incomplete
> and not well
> > understood...
> >
> > Please review. If the changes are okay - Please advice if I
> should go
> > ahead and submit it or if I should continue to wait for further
> > clarification / comments from IESG...
> >
> > The new alpha version to be found at:
> >
http://home.attbi.com/~tony.johansson/IETF_stuff/draft-ietf-aaa-diameter
> -mobileip-14alpha1.txt
>
> To help the reader - below is a list of things that I have changed from
> -13.
>
> * Added section 15 - Intellectual Property Considerations (Issue
> 385)
> * Fixed the wording in Introduction 2nd paragraph (Issue 385)
> * Added [KEYWORDS] to normative reference section (Issue 385)
> * Reworked section 1.10 (Issue 386)
> * Change the Nonce to be a random [RANDOM] value of at least 128
> bits (Issue 386)
> * Fixed editorial nits in Figure 6 (Issue 393)
> * Fixed editorial nits in section 2.1 and 2.3 (Issue 393)
> * Not changed any functionality wishes (Issue 393)
> * Removed IPaddress type and added Address as now defined in
> Base....
> * Fixed more editorial nits in section 4.7..
>
> Regards,
>
> /Tony